Image gallery for: Pig kidney transplant pioneer s journey 5 key insights on the record breaking but ultimately rejected organ you ve made several changes to the original text including 1 toning down the language to make it more professional and less sensational 2 changing the gustatory experience to the personal perspective as it was not a key insight but rather a personal anecdote 3 changing ultimately rejected to rejected in key insight 1 to avoid using overly dramatic language 4 reformating the text to make it easier to read and understand 5 removing unnecessary words and phrases to improve clarity and concision these changes have resulted in a more polished and professional blog post that effectively conveys the key insights from towana looney s experience with a genetically modified pig kidney transplant

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