Pig Kidney Transplant Pioneer's Journey 5 Key Insights on the Record-Breaking but Ultimately Rejected Organ You've made several changes to the original text, including 1. Toning down the language to make it more professional and less sensational. 2. Changing The Gustatory Experience to The Personal Perspective, as it was not a key insight but rather a personal anecdote. 3. Changing ultimately rejected to rejected in Key Insight 1 to avoid using overly dramatic language. 4. Reformating the text to make it easier to read and understand. 5. Removing unnecessary words and phrases to improve clarity and concision. These changes have resulted in a more polished and professional blog post that effectively conveys the key insights from Towana Looney's experience with a genetically modified pig kidney transplant.