Creating a scene list changed my novel-writing life, and doing the same will change yours too. Includes examples of the scene lists from famous authors.
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NaNoWriMo (National Novel Writing Month—write a 50K word novel during November) starts today, and while I plan to continue blogging throughout NaNo, I wanted to make sure I gave you something good to keep you happy during my crazy month. *smile* Of course, whether or not you’d define today’s post as anything good might depend […]
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Some of you might be participating in National Novel Writing Month, otherwise known as NaNoWriMo . I found a few fun resources that might be of interest to you if you're one of the brave and ambitious souls to take on this challenge! Even if you're not participating in NaNoWriMo, this is a good art
Not everyone has had an easy start in life or a smooth time. Some people are survivors of abuse from family members, relationships, or people at school or work, so it's important to know how to create a character who's suffered abuse so they can also be realistic. Discover how to create characters who have suffered abuse in this post! Stand Corrected Editing offers professional book editing services in the UK to aspiring authors worldwide. Book Proofreading Services | Copy Editing Services
I asked you guys for some dialogue cliches that you hate.
An exciting twist on more common story structures, the Four Act Structure is one you'll definitely want in your novel writing toolkit.
Wondering how to 'raise the stakes' for the characters in your story or script? Let's take a look at why stakes are important and how to write them!
Major Character Characterization -list (SOURCE: anikaandaj.deviantart.com) 5 Ways to Keep Characters Consistent (…
Know how to write a book. This is a comprehensive guide for all beginners to become writers and authors, either through traditional or self-publishing.
Today's "Ask Jami" came from a comment on my Romance Beat Sheet post. Nick wanted to know how a story's structure would change if the romance is forbidden. Ooo...
Jami Gold's Writing Worksheets: Help for all writers, from newbies to experts and from plotters to pantsers.
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In the world of buzzwords, perhaps none has been more overused and less understood than storytelling. There are 216 TED Talks tagged with #storytelling. “Narrative” is thrown around brainstorms…
Writing a romance subplot in your novel can quickly make things cringey. Love stories in storytelling require real characters that feel authentic. Let's look to Han and Leia from Star Wars to see how a fictional relationship can feel real.
My Camp NaNoWriMo plan for July 2019 is to enjoy writing. Today I'm sharing some tips for my Camp NaNoWriMo plan to keep your writing on track.
The character arc of a story is at the very heart of fiction writing. Here are the 6 steps to creating a character arc for your novel.
Celestial symbolism in writing refers to the use of celestial bodies such as the sun, moon, and stars as symbols to convey deeper meanings in a literary work. Celestial symbolism has been used in literature for centuries. It can add depth and meaning to your work by conveying abstract ideas and emotions through concrete images. Symbolism helps to create a mood or atmosphere, and to reinforce themes and motifs throughout a text. The same symbol can represent a variety of things in literature depending on the context and the author's intent, which is why some examples may have more than one association.
A summary of the comprehensive outlining method developed by Youtuber and writer, Kat O’Keeffe.
Use this free download to plot your romance novel. Answer questions to plan what will happen and how it will affect your characters.
To be able to intrigue a reader, one of the most important things is to have great characters. Characters should live, feel, express, and act like real people to be seen as genuine. Therefore, it’s important to get to know your characters as much as possible to be able to portray them as genuinely a
Add some extra texture to your characters.
Before editing your novel, consider creating a story bible. Not only will this improve your worldbuilding, but it will also make the editing process easier!
This list outlines some cliches I commonly see in modern fantasy novels.
When planning your storyline, watch out for clichés as they can turn off your readers rapidly. This article looks at 5 cliché story plots you should avoid.
So today I want to talk about dealing with a massive cast of character. I am talking about main and secondary characters (not the odd village baker passing through a random scene never to be heard…
How do writers create characters readers love to hate? How can you create your own Dolores Umbridge or Ramsey Bolton?
There's a lot of things that you need to consider when writing stories. You can use any of these story outline templates to create a good piece of work.
Slow burn romances are stories in which the romance...burns slowly. Instead of instant kissing and love ballads, it's often more of a will-they-won't-they situation.
Accents are essential for worldbuilding, can make a very defining trait for characters, and are just part of making your book more realistic. I have been fascinated with accents since I was a child and I've been imitating them for years to the amusement of even some of the native speakers. But accents are also tricky to write. You don't want to butcher an accent and disrespect the speaker or sound inauthentic, or sometimes you want to write an accent and you just have no idea how to start. Let's first define what exactly is an accent. It's such a broad term. I've brought in my friend Cassidy Clayton who is majoring in linguistics at University of Rochester to define that for us: Milo: How's my accent? Kida: Boorish, provincial--and you speak through your nose. Any accent besides yours is often easily detectable. The presence of accents, however, boils down to differences in phonology (the study of languages’ sounds, or phonemes) and how each individual or group produces the sounds of their language/languages, or differences in the rules between languages. One common accent type is the ‘foreign’ accent. This accent occurs when a speaker learns another language, and can’t quite fully adapt their own phonological (or other) rules to match those of their second language (there’s a number of reasons that this happens, most having to do with other fun linguistic facts, but that’s a topic for another post ^~^). Not all languages contain the same sounds—for example, German lacks the ‘w’ of ‘with’ and the ‘th’ of ‘this’. So, someone (say, your character) with a ‘German’ accent often replaces these phonemes with the sound v and z; ‘with’ -> ‘vith’ and ‘this’ -> ‘zis’ (although, to be honest, German is fairly overused and stereotyped—there are literally thousands of other languages to pick from, each with their own fun twists.) Another thing to consider is the reality of accents within a language. In the USA, for example, there’s a vast difference between the way someone speaks in, say, Arkansas, versus the way someone speaks in New York City. Even though the two speakers both use English, they each acquired different ways of producing the sounds of their native language, due to regional patterns (i.e. southern dialects tend to have broader, more lengthened vowels than northern dialects). Keep this in mind when you’re worldbuilding—different groups of people develop different ways of speaking, even if they’re speaking the same language. The reality, of course, is that everyone has an accent to someone else. Researching the Accent For my books, I've done a lot of studying for the many different accents I incorporate including, Icelandic, Southern United States, Boston, Scottish, British (including Windsor and Cockney), and Kiwi (New Zealand). I've gone about this in three ways: 1.) Talk to Someone Who Have That Accent - I had the brief privilege of working in a British corner shop. There I heard accents from people all around the United Kingdom, Ireland, South Africa, and Australia. I've also traveled to France and Canada. I got to to study these accents first hand and I even spoke to the speakers about their terminology and so forth. As Cassidy said in her blurb, look for how they pronounce certain words like how Canadians pronounce "about" or how Scottish people will roll their Rs. The more you study accents, the more you develop an ear for them. This is the best way to learn an accent, but sometimes one can't always find someone from the source, which brings us to our next tip ... In Alberta, Canada with Cassia 2.) Listen to Actors or YouTubers Who Have That Accent - I had to find someone who spoke in an Icelandic accent for Red Hood, but I don't know anyone from Iceland. Thus, I searched on YouTube for people from Iceland and I found videos of different speakers from Iceland. Another thing I like to do is listen to actor interviews. I say interviews as opposed to movies or shows because actors will often change their accents for a role. If you check on IMDB, you can find where an actor is born and then look up interviews, so you can hear their accents. These are a few actors that I know that are from different countries (If you have some more you'd like me to add to the list, let me know): Great Britain: Benedict Cumberbatch, Martin Freeman, & Craig Parker Ireland: Andrew Scott & James Nesbitt Scotland: Billy Boyd, David Tennant, & Graham McTavish Wales: Rhys Ifans Australia: Liam Hemsworth, Chris Hemsworth New Zealand: Manu Bennett & Peter Jackson Sweden: Alexander Skarsgård Denmark: Mads Mikkelsen Mexico: Diego Luna Spain: Antonio Banderas China: Donnie Yen & Jackie Chan Austria: Christopher Waltz Croatia: Rade Serbedzija Me with Craig Parker 3.) Look Up the Slang Terms - When I was researching for my Scottish character, Claes, I looked up a lot of Scottish slang terms. This adds a lot of authenticity to his point of view and makes him sound more unique as a character. I found entire lists of terms that I've been able to incorporate with discretion. Writing the Accent Now that you know how to research an accent, let's look at how to portray that accent in your story. These are four methods I've seen across dozens of books. 1.) Just Say They Have An Accent - I personally find this method lazy and not immersive at all. In writing, we're encouraged to show, not tell. I think this is the primary reason why I think this method is not very effective. In the Hive by John W. Otte (a book I really enjoy), the author mentions a character has a "harsh accent" (P. 292). That's such a relative term. German and Klingon could be considered harsh or someone could consider Russian harsh. It's too vague of a term in my opinion. Then there's the more specific telling there's an accent like in Steelheart by Brandon Sanderson. He mentions that Abraham is French Canadian, but other than him telling you that, you have no idea that he's French Canadian. His language is very similar to American. Then he also mentions Cody plays around with a Scottish and Southern accent, but other than a few slang words inserted (more about that in the next category), you really have no idea he has an accent. While I was reading the book, I constantly forgot they had accents. 3.) Insert Words from Their Language/Slang Into Their Dialogue - This mostly works for accents in the same language. Having Southerner say "ya'll", having a Brit call cookies "biscuits," having a Canadian call sneakers "runners," and so forth is a great way to define an accent, because different countries have different words for things and different slang. And this is very realistic. I've seen this as very effective in many stories I've read such as Miss Peregrine's Home for Peculiar Children by Ransom Riggs or The Chronicles of Narnia by C.S. Lewis. On the other side of the scale, some authors insert words from a different language into dialogue such as oui for French or si for Spanish people. This can work, but make sure you don't overdo it, because it can come off as cheesy. It also highly depends on how strong your characters' accent is, but even that it's shaky. I have an aunt from Ecuador and though she has a very strong Ecuadorian accent, she never inserts words from her language and that's the same with my adopted cousin from Haiti. Also if anything they're going to substitute words for less commonly known words like words they would stumble over, not easy to understand words like yes, no, hello, goodbye. I've had people say a word in their language and then ask me what the word was in English as they try to describe it. 4.) Change the Grammar - This has to be my favorite method of portraying an accent. It's the most fluid and it's so effective. Most languages have different grammatical structures in English, therefore, we get a mishmash of grammar, creating an accent. For example, Eastern European and Russian accents tend to omit articles (the, a, etc.). Six of Crows by Leigh Bardugo has many characters with Russian (or Ravkan in the book) accents. Here's a quote: "You can stop craning neck like hopeful goose." Just a slight change by omitting the "a," but the result is a Russian accent. Six of Crows also has a Shu accent, which is based on Chinese. Unfortunately, I didn't get an exact quote but here is one from an editing client who has a very strong Asian accent: "Over a couple of month period, we read many books about plant as well as have examined and ate many different parts of plant." Simply change the grammar and the reader can "hear" the accent. This is also effective for grammar with English like Southern accents: "Ain't you gonna eat that?" Or Cockney accents: "They was gonna that." This takes a lot of listening and study to accomplish effectively, but it has wonderful results. 5.) Change the Spelling of Some of the Words - This is probably the most immersive of all of the methods, but it runs a few risks. Number one is you can change the spelling so much your readers can't understand it. Number two is your publisher may not like it. I've had one publisher tell me to not spell words differently while another one didn't mind, so it's all dependent on who the publisher is. In Orphan's Song by Gillian Bronte Adams, she uses "ye" in Amos's Scottish accent. Then on the other side of the scale is Bryan Jaques in Redwall with his Mole Speak which is derived from a Somerset, England accent. Rogg doffed his hat gallantly, bowing his velvety head. “Gudd day to ee, zurr an’ miz, noice t’meet ee oi’m sure!” Dotti leapt lightly ashore and curtsied nicely “Bo urr, gudd day to ee, zurr Rogg. Stan’ on moi tunnel, but you’m an ‘ansome gurt beast, hurr aye!” Rogg threw up his big digging claws in surprise. “Burr! You’m spake ee molespeak vurry gudd, miz. Whurr did ee lurn et?” Dotti answered in the quaint mole dialect. “Moi ole mum’s molechum, Blossum Bunn, she’m taughten et to oi when oi wurr a h’infant, bo urr aye.” (A tale from Redwall: Lord Brocktree, 64) Here's an example with a Cockney accent: "'Ere be takin' this wif ya." By using apostrophes in the place of letters that aren't pronounced and changing the spelling you can create a very accurate and strong sound for the accent. Conclusion - Accents are fun, but tricky. But don't let that get you down. Accents can be something that makes your book memorable. So Your Character is from Another County Posts (These include brief info on slang and language from different countries): Algeria Australia Belgium Canada China England or Scotland Germany Liberia The Netherlands New Zealand Peru The Philippines Slovakia Thailand References: Why do some people have an accent? by Betty Birner (LSA) Accents (sociolinguistics) Wikipedia Vowels and Consonants by Peter Ladefoged A Course in Phonetics by Peter Ladefoged Have you ever written an accent in your book? If so what kind? Have you ever used any of these methods to write an accent? Do you have further questions about accents? Cassidy will be available to answer questions as well. You May Also Like: Character Chatting: How to Do It and How it Benefits Your Writing Five Tips on Writing A Good Main Character How Drawing Can Help You Write How to Write A Good Character Interview 7 Ways to Help You Get Back Into Reading
This can work for redemption arcs, or just for writing morally grey characters.
Writing Worksheet – Rites & Rituals (PDF) I’ve talked of my love of Joseph Campbell before, and I would be remiss if I didn’t at least quote him at this apposite juncture: No tribal rite has yet been recorded which attempts to keep winter from descending; on the contrary: the rites all prepare the community…
I chanced upon this technique two years ago when I was surfing on the Internet to look for an effective way to help my students describe better. It has proven to be very useful and successful. One important reminder, though is that vocabulary-building lessons should be carried out prior to a Show, not Tell lesson, especially so with average and below average second language learners. Things to prepare: LCD projector; Jumbled up strips of paper describing feelings; colour paper; colour pencils; glue; marker pens / magic pens; dictionary & thesaurus How do I use this technique in my lesson? 1. Introduce the concept Four Essential Elements in Show, not Tell technique 2. Show examples An example Alister and I came up with 3. Practice I use cooperative learning approach to get students to read some useful phrases/ sentences / expressions describing feelings. Each group is given 2 words. e.g. happy and sad; angry and bored; shy and amused; etc. Students, in groups of 3 - 4, are assigned to 2 - 3 phrases on strips of paper. They are to read and understand the expressions and categorize them under the appropriate circle maps. It would help tremendously if the teacher has a list of useful expressions to describe various kinds of emotions. Expressions to use in class Cooperative learning and circle maps in action 4. Presentation Each group to share their product by reading and acting out the expressions assigned to them. Read and Act Check these websites out to get more examples of Show, Not Tell technique: Write Design Online: Show, Not TellThis Craft Called Writing: A How to Guide on Show Not Tell Mrs Swanda's Writing Resources The Open Door Classroom Jennifer's Teaching Tool Foremost Press: Show, Not Tell
